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i thought we were friends i guess i was wrong.....
« Thread Started on Dec 13, 2008, 11:17am »

silverear walked out of the warriors den during the crisp leaf-fall
morning.his sister,silvertail(sorry i cant think of any other names please message me any names that u think would be good for my story)yawned and pushed her way out of the warriors den to sit by her brother.silverear looked over at the fresh kill pile it had barely any food on it.we should go out to hunt meowed silvertail obviously noticing that there was barely any food on the pile also.
yeah replied silverear as he got up and shook the scraps of moss from his dark coat.the two headed for the exit of the clan that led out into the forest.silverear opened his mouth and the scent of prey hit the roof of his mouth he silently slid through the forest like a drifting shadow he smelled a juicy rabbit somewhere near and he also smelled a mouse and a water vole.he finally sighted the rabbit,it was plump and looked juicy.he quickly fell into a hunters crouch and crept up on it without making a sound then he pounced on his unsuspecting prey he slashed at it with thorn sharp claws,it died iinstantly.he scraped earth over it so he could collect it later.meanwhile silvertail was expertly creeping up on a small sparrow,it was nibbling on a seed finally silvertail pounced on it.the two hunted until sunhigh.by the time they had gotten all their prey back to camp the pile was filled up and there was plenty of fresh kill for everyone to eat.

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Re: i thought we were friends i guess i was wrong.
« Reply #1 on Dec 23, 2008, 3:34pm »

just give me a while it takes a while for me to think of ideas while doing schoolwork

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Re: i thought we were friends i guess i was wrong.
« Reply #2 on Dec 24, 2008, 7:39am »

Ok. I like it so far!

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Re: i thought we were friends i guess i was wrong.
« Reply #3 on Dec 25, 2008, 10:05am »

thanks bramble!!!!!=^_^=

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« Reply #4 on Jan 5, 2009, 3:27pm »

well done you two meowed firestar.as he approached them from out of his den.you two deserve to eat he meowed observing the now well stocked freshkill pile.

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« Reply #5 on Jun 6, 2009, 9:37pm »

Dec 13, 2008, 11:17am, sunpelt wrote:

silverear walked out of the warriors den during the crisp leaf-fall
morning.his sister,Shiningpelt yawned and pushed her way out of the warriors den to sit by her brother.silverear looked over at the fresh kill pile it had barely any food on it.we should go out to hunt meowed silvertail obviously noticing that there was barely any food on the pile also.
yeah replied Shiningpelt as he got up and shook the scraps of moss from his dark coat.the two headed for the exit of the clan that led out into the forest.silverear opened his mouth and the scent of prey hit the roof of his mouth he silently slid through the forest like a drifting shadow he smelled a juicy rabbit somewhere near and he also smelled a mouse and a water vole.he finally sighted the rabbit,it was plump and looked juicy.he quickly fell into a hunters crouch and crept up on it without making a sound then he pounced on his unsuspecting prey he slashed at it with thorn sharp claws,it died iinstantly.he scraped earth over it so he could collect it later.meanwhile silvertail was expertly creeping up on a small sparrow,it was nibbling on a seed finally Shiningpelt pounced on it.the two hunted until sunhigh.by the time they had gotten all their prey back to camp the pile was filled up and there was plenty of fresh kill for everyone to eat.

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