Post by Wolfsong on Jun 28, 2007 8:29:52 GMT -5
((the stars are where I added new things....))
Two days later, Night heard a ThunderClan patrol, he hissed with a voice he hadn't used in days. Dispite his hoarse protest, they took him away as he yowled at them to kill him. That life was not worth living anymore. Lily was through with gasping for air, she didn't even have the stregnth to open her mouth. Darkness came and the miserable cat heard pawsteps and a startled gasp. Then she felt teeth grasp her neck as she began to get dragged into the same place her brother was. Night sank to the ground with relief that her sister was still alive, he walked past his two guards to reach Lily. The next day, they were given new names of Coalkit and Emberkit even though Emberkit was still on the brink of death.
Codeword: Mice...a tasty cat treat.[/center]
Name: Coalkit Emberkit
Age: 5 moons
Alliance: Thunder
Rank: Kits
Gender: Tom She-cat
Appearance: Coalkit is a dark grey tabby tom. He has a very solid appearence with medium length fur. Coalkit has blazing green eyes that almost look as if they hold the very life of the forest in them. Emberkit is a gorgous she-cat that has very odd coloring. She has the black and grey tabby fur of her brother on her tail, back and belly, and the top of her head. Then she has ginger and white blending into the dark tabby fur, making her look stunning. Emberkit has ginger ringing her legs, then white blending into the ginger, ending with white paws. Emberkit then has a white neck, chest, and stretches then blends into the dark tabby fur on her underbelly. She also has eyes that forever shine with the fire that almost took her life....
Picture: Coal= www.deviantart.com/deviation/53226430/?qo=7&q=darkgreycatwithorangeeyes&qh=boost%3Apopularage_sigma%3A24hage_scale%3A5
Ember= www.deviantart.com/deviation/51665193/?qo=48&q=catwithorangeeyes&qh=boost%3Apopularage_sigma%3A24hage_scale%3A5
Personality: Coalkit is a very nice, easygoing young tom. He easy to get along with even though cats look at him with hatred in thier eyes about thier history. Coalkit is funny and loves hanging out with his friends and the new kits. Every once in a while, he stops playing suddenly and moves apart from the playing to think about his past. Coalkit loves his new life and has quickly forgotten everything he learned in the past and has high hopes for the future. Coalkit is strong and brave, he believes in StarClan and the Warrior Code. **Coalkit also loves hunting but hates the way that Emberkit hunts. He will eventually forget his kithood altogether and drift very far from her sister, almost as if they were never siblings at all but rivals that were born worlds apart. Coalkit loves playing with the new kits that are seeming to come in constantly in the nursery.** Emberkit sadly, is very quiet and **the complete oppisite of her brother.** She even doesn't talk to her brother anymore, she may say a few words to Rowanpaw every now and then though. **The she-cat doesn't even want any part of the Clan but believes that if she stays long enough, ThunderClan will eventually become the place she belongs. Her feelings almost never ever show, making her seem like air. The she-cat loves hunting way more than her brother but she has a diffrent way of hunting, a very diffrent way. It's the only pleasure she has anymore. Emberkit is hunting larger and larger prey in her own way behind her Clans back. Ember kit is just waiting for the day when she hunts...... (well, you'll just have to wait and see won't we)** Emberkit still remembers everything, every sad, hopeless, terrifing moment. The she-cat looks as if she's lost the very will to live, and doesn't believe that StarClan can help bring her mother back. She does believe in StarClan and the Warrior Code but only slightly. Emberkit has an invisible shield that ThunderClan cats do not like and Emberkit does not even realize it. She seems to be waiting for something though...
History: They both have the same history basically. Coalkit and Emberkit are brother and sister. Thier mother and father where both rogues who are very well known and hated with a passion by ThunderClan and all the other Clans. Thier names, Scourge and Ravenrush... The two kits lived with thier mother for all of thier life. Thier father abandoned the three when he chose to join DeathClan, he later died in the battle with ShadowClan. The two kits started learning how to battle and hunt at three moons to ensure thier survival. Thier lives were filled with love, even though they were raised in the harsh cruel ways of rogues. Coalkit learned very early that it was kill or be killed in the world of rougues and Twolegs. Emberkit learned to hate the Clan cats with ever fiber of bone in her body. She also learned how to tourture her prey, making them suffer with every dying breath.
At five moons old, Ravenrush was just about to show the kits how to kill other cats. It's very lucky that they didn't but what happened next you'd never want on any cat, no matter how hated. A fire broke out in the Twoleg nest they were nesting next too. The fire blazed to the next house, and the one behind them. Ravenrush raced Coalkit out out of thier nest of rubbish, pratically throwing him into the forest inside ThunderClan's territory. Then they she-cat raced back, only to find that the fire had spread rapidy. The mother leaped the fire and threw Emberkit in the grass a few fox-lengths outside of ThunderClan territory.
But it was too late for the dedicated mother to get out, she died screaming in pain as the flames enguled her beautiful body. Emberkit was unconsious as the flames came tail lengths from her own body. The fire was put out a day after it started. Coalkit watched from the bushes with eyes glazed in fear, afraid that he'd never see his mother or sister again.
Two day later, Coalkit was starving and Emberkit was on the border of death. A ThunderClan patrol found Coalkit at sunhigh and rushed him into thier camp, totally missing Emberkit... At moonrise, the beautiful she-cat was barely breathing, preparing herself for death. Emberkit was only saved by an apprentice breaking the rules that Bramblestar had laid, saying that no apprentice was allowed near Twolegplace and being out at night.
ICC: It was pitch black when Lily raised her head, she heard something. Was it a roar? What could it be? Night meowed, "Go back to sleep. It's in the middle of the night." "No, Night, something's wrong."
[/b] Night rolled his eyes, "How about we wake up mom just to be sure. Mom! Lily thinks something's wrong. " Suddenly a fire blazed out of the Twoleg nest, and quickly spread. Ravenrush woke with a gasp, grabbed Night and raced to the forest. Lily yowled after her mother, her vioce full of fear of the fire and being alone, but the she-cat was frozen in fear. Her mother came back, and threw Lily with no time to run and being trapped by the flames. Lily hit the bouncy, soft grass with a hard thud. She stayed consious long enough to hear her mother scream at her to run before the meowing turned to pure shrieks of death that was still alive. Night watched, Will I ever see them again? Night cryed out, but his voice was choked with tears. Age: 5 moons
Alliance: Thunder
Rank: Kits
Gender: Tom She-cat
Appearance: Coalkit is a dark grey tabby tom. He has a very solid appearence with medium length fur. Coalkit has blazing green eyes that almost look as if they hold the very life of the forest in them. Emberkit is a gorgous she-cat that has very odd coloring. She has the black and grey tabby fur of her brother on her tail, back and belly, and the top of her head. Then she has ginger and white blending into the dark tabby fur, making her look stunning. Emberkit has ginger ringing her legs, then white blending into the ginger, ending with white paws. Emberkit then has a white neck, chest, and stretches then blends into the dark tabby fur on her underbelly. She also has eyes that forever shine with the fire that almost took her life....
Picture: Coal= www.deviantart.com/deviation/53226430/?qo=7&q=darkgreycatwithorangeeyes&qh=boost%3Apopularage_sigma%3A24hage_scale%3A5
Ember= www.deviantart.com/deviation/51665193/?qo=48&q=catwithorangeeyes&qh=boost%3Apopularage_sigma%3A24hage_scale%3A5
Personality: Coalkit is a very nice, easygoing young tom. He easy to get along with even though cats look at him with hatred in thier eyes about thier history. Coalkit is funny and loves hanging out with his friends and the new kits. Every once in a while, he stops playing suddenly and moves apart from the playing to think about his past. Coalkit loves his new life and has quickly forgotten everything he learned in the past and has high hopes for the future. Coalkit is strong and brave, he believes in StarClan and the Warrior Code. **Coalkit also loves hunting but hates the way that Emberkit hunts. He will eventually forget his kithood altogether and drift very far from her sister, almost as if they were never siblings at all but rivals that were born worlds apart. Coalkit loves playing with the new kits that are seeming to come in constantly in the nursery.** Emberkit sadly, is very quiet and **the complete oppisite of her brother.** She even doesn't talk to her brother anymore, she may say a few words to Rowanpaw every now and then though. **The she-cat doesn't even want any part of the Clan but believes that if she stays long enough, ThunderClan will eventually become the place she belongs. Her feelings almost never ever show, making her seem like air. The she-cat loves hunting way more than her brother but she has a diffrent way of hunting, a very diffrent way. It's the only pleasure she has anymore. Emberkit is hunting larger and larger prey in her own way behind her Clans back. Ember kit is just waiting for the day when she hunts...... (well, you'll just have to wait and see won't we)** Emberkit still remembers everything, every sad, hopeless, terrifing moment. The she-cat looks as if she's lost the very will to live, and doesn't believe that StarClan can help bring her mother back. She does believe in StarClan and the Warrior Code but only slightly. Emberkit has an invisible shield that ThunderClan cats do not like and Emberkit does not even realize it. She seems to be waiting for something though...
History: They both have the same history basically. Coalkit and Emberkit are brother and sister. Thier mother and father where both rogues who are very well known and hated with a passion by ThunderClan and all the other Clans. Thier names, Scourge and Ravenrush... The two kits lived with thier mother for all of thier life. Thier father abandoned the three when he chose to join DeathClan, he later died in the battle with ShadowClan. The two kits started learning how to battle and hunt at three moons to ensure thier survival. Thier lives were filled with love, even though they were raised in the harsh cruel ways of rogues. Coalkit learned very early that it was kill or be killed in the world of rougues and Twolegs. Emberkit learned to hate the Clan cats with ever fiber of bone in her body. She also learned how to tourture her prey, making them suffer with every dying breath.
At five moons old, Ravenrush was just about to show the kits how to kill other cats. It's very lucky that they didn't but what happened next you'd never want on any cat, no matter how hated. A fire broke out in the Twoleg nest they were nesting next too. The fire blazed to the next house, and the one behind them. Ravenrush raced Coalkit out out of thier nest of rubbish, pratically throwing him into the forest inside ThunderClan's territory. Then they she-cat raced back, only to find that the fire had spread rapidy. The mother leaped the fire and threw Emberkit in the grass a few fox-lengths outside of ThunderClan territory.
But it was too late for the dedicated mother to get out, she died screaming in pain as the flames enguled her beautiful body. Emberkit was unconsious as the flames came tail lengths from her own body. The fire was put out a day after it started. Coalkit watched from the bushes with eyes glazed in fear, afraid that he'd never see his mother or sister again.
Two day later, Coalkit was starving and Emberkit was on the border of death. A ThunderClan patrol found Coalkit at sunhigh and rushed him into thier camp, totally missing Emberkit... At moonrise, the beautiful she-cat was barely breathing, preparing herself for death. Emberkit was only saved by an apprentice breaking the rules that Bramblestar had laid, saying that no apprentice was allowed near Twolegplace and being out at night.
ICC: It was pitch black when Lily raised her head, she heard something. Was it a roar? What could it be? Night meowed, "Go back to sleep. It's in the middle of the night." "No, Night, something's wrong."
Two days later, Night heard a ThunderClan patrol, he hissed with a voice he hadn't used in days. Dispite his hoarse protest, they took him away as he yowled at them to kill him. That life was not worth living anymore. Lily was through with gasping for air, she didn't even have the stregnth to open her mouth. Darkness came and the miserable cat heard pawsteps and a startled gasp. Then she felt teeth grasp her neck as she began to get dragged into the same place her brother was. Night sank to the ground with relief that her sister was still alive, he walked past his two guards to reach Lily. The next day, they were given new names of Coalkit and Emberkit even though Emberkit was still on the brink of death.
Codeword: Mice...a tasty cat treat.[/center]
I'm hoping these 2 will be very important... u know with everyone knowing who thier father and mother were, thier bound to get some hateful words and glares thrown at them.
