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Post by Smallclaw on May 1, 2007 17:13:58 GMT -5
Brightpaw got down into a crouch, ready to show her mentor her best hunting position. She lifted her head, and opened her mouth slightly. MOUSE! She crept forward, letting each paw slip after another. Before she knew it, a small brown fur ball appeared. Brightpaw quickly jumped, but a little to early. The mouse saw her in time, then ran off. Brightpaw squeezed the ground with frustration. "I missed!"
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Post by winterleaf on May 1, 2007 22:39:06 GMT -5
“Its okay, you can not always finish up victorious!” Silversnow meowed kindly. “On the other hand, that was a good crouch. Repeat it. And don’t jump with anticipation, but neither to late. Just when the prey you’re looking for moves or gets distracted, swiftly stalk towards it. Remember to muffle your scent with other plants and camufflage your pelt. Then, slash your claws over your future prey. To kill it, bite its neck.” She explained. She crouched when she caught a glimpse of a snowy white pelt nibbling on a seed below a bush. She moved on foward towards it, hiding her ivory coat with a group of emerald ferns. A mouse tail away from the rabbit, Silversnow lapped her claws over it. The small creature got stuck in them. She rapidly bit its neck, making it fall dead to the ground. ((sorry crappy post  ))
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Post by Smallclaw on May 4, 2007 19:57:06 GMT -5
Brightpaw watched her mentor as she caught prey. Brightpaw wanted to catch prey, just like her! She got into a crouch, trying her best. She waited a moment until another mouse came along and was easily distracted by something in a bush. Brightpaw stalked forward, and just when the mouse was about to run, she plunged forward grasping the mouse in her claws. Brightpaw bit its kneck, and let its limp body fall to the ground. "Was that good?" she asked eagerly.
(( not a crappy post at all ))
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Post by winterleaf on May 4, 2007 23:12:31 GMT -5
“Perfect!” Silversnow replied. She swiped a rozy tongue by Brightpaw’s muzzle. “I must say, you are agile, smart, and brave! Ready to become a warrior!” the ivory warrior meowed. Before proceeding, she halted. Lets give her a surprise... She thought. “Brightpaw, you deserve a break. Take a short time of rest while I, er, while I hunt a little bit, okay?” she meowed quite edgy. She dipped her head in farewell and padded towards the Windclan camp, ready to tell Rainstar the news.
((I’ll PM Rain about Bright’s ceremony ^^)) |
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Post by Smallclaw on May 4, 2007 23:14:50 GMT -5
Brightpaw stood where she was. She decided to hunt a bit, and then maybe go back to camp and rest.
(( ok... hurray =] ))
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Post by winterleaf on May 4, 2007 23:52:08 GMT -5
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Post by Smallclaw on May 5, 2007 15:21:21 GMT -5
((( okie dokie )))
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Post by winterleaf on May 5, 2007 15:45:35 GMT -5
((What will her warrior name be?))
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Post by Smallclaw on May 5, 2007 19:30:18 GMT -5
(( i think i PMed it to Rain. i think it was Brightclaw. [name made up my Brambe] when i was going to make Brightpaw, Bramble suggested Brightclaw, and i guess it just stuck  )) |
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Post by winterleaf on May 6, 2007 13:38:07 GMT -5
((Oh lol its cute! =3))
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Post by Smallclaw on May 6, 2007 17:07:38 GMT -5
(( thanks )) |
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Pikachu is my ganstaa friend =) 
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