Another Prophecy

[Moonflower]

I hope you guys like this I thought I give it a try to try to write something


Another Prophecy
Prologue

The brown tabby made his way through the forest toward four-trees to meet with his mate. He caught her scent on the wind and turned to catch a glimpse of her black pelt. The black she-cat walked up to the tabby and licked his ears affectionately; she let out a soft purr. She then turned around and walked back to one of the trees and came back carrying a little black kit, the tabby ran over and looked at his kit, there was no mistaking the she was his, her eyes were the same color blue as his, though she had her mother’s black pelt. When she was old enough he would take her back to his clan for them to raise her, he was sure she would make an excellent warrior.
He was interrupted from his thoughts by the sound of dogs coming closer; he picked up his kit and motioned for the she-cat to run. They both ran at full speed and they could both only hope that the dogs wouldn’t catch up.

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Wow! That's really good!

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Double post:
Are you planning to put up more? You should. ^^

[Moonflower]

I'm going too I'm still working on the next chapter though. Even though I need an idea for what the prophecy is going to be so any ideas you have I'd love to hear them. The main characters in the story are going to be Moonpaw, Lightningclaw, Riverpaw/wing, and Racoonpaw and if nobody minds I'd like to use some of the cats you guys RP.

[Moonflower]

Ok here is an update!


Another Prophecy
CH. 1

Moonkit had been up since dawn and she was still full of energy. Today was her apprentice ceremony she had finally turned six moons and she was overly excited about it. She was currently the oldest kit in ThunderClan and she had no brothers or sisters. She stood out more then the other kits also, it wasn’t because of her black pelt or blue eyes, but it was because of the blue-gray crescent on her head. She had never known her real parents, but she didn’t really care about that anymore, her adoptive mother Goldenflower was nice enough and had always taken good care of her when she was a young kit.
She loved everything about being a ThunderClan cat and she had made plenty of friends, even though they knew she wasn’t a ThunderClan born cat. Of course everybody had gotten over that small fact and nobody brought it up anymore either. She had decided to go and see if any of the apprentices were still in their den, she wanted to ask them about what it was like being an apprentice.
Only Squirrelpaw and Shrewpaw were there, all the others were probably out training with their mentors. Squirrelpaw noticed her first.
“Hi Moonkit, what are you doing here?” Squirrelpaw asked
“I just wanted to ask you guys what its like being an apprentice.” Moonkit mewed shyly.
“Oh yeah I forgot your apprentice ceremony is today.” She replied.
“Yeah it is and I can’t wait to see who my mentor is.” Moonkit mewed happily.
They were then interrupted by Firestar’s voice.
“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather below High Rock for a Clan meeting.”
Moonkit happily ran over the Highrock, before Squirrelpaw even left the den.
“Today Moonkit has reached six moons and will now receive her apprentice name.” Firestar’s voice was heard throughout the camp.
Moonkit walked forward, “I now give Moonkit the name Moonpaw, until she has become a warrior. Her mentor will be Brambleclaw.”
Brambleclaw walked over to his apprentice and they touched noses.
“Moonpaw, Moonpaw, Moonpaw.” The ThunderClan cats chanted.
Moonpaw grinned, she was an apprentice now.