Post by Raven on Mar 27, 2007 4:49:34 GMT -5
Name: Longclaw
Age: 25 moons
Alliance: Shadowclan
Rank: Deputy
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Longclaw is a lean weathered tom. He is mainly gray with a large white patch on his chest. His muzzle is white as well. Longclaw is sized well enough. He has no extras and he has nothing to small. He does however have longer claws, tail, and body then most cats. His fur is short and wiry. Longclaw has light handsome amber eyes. He is fast and you'd wonder at his heritage. Longclaw's ears are like silk and his under belly is just as soft. Longclaw is light on his paws and very quiet. His tail is constantly moving, even in his sleep. It only flicks, but it annoys Longclaw greatly.
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Personality: He is the kind of cat you can trust. He is always ready to give out advice. He surprisingly isn't patient. Longclaw is pushing for more. Constantly stepping on others tails. Many hate him for the way he acts, but Longclaw cares not what others think. He will never break the warrior code unless it is for good. He is only loyal to Shadowclan and Starclan. Longclaw doesn't fall in love easily. Anyone trying to win his heart will be sourly disappointed. That doesn't mean he won't ever settle down. He's just checking out his options. Longclaw can be friendly, but only to close cats.
History: Longclaw was born in Shadowclan on a warm newleaf night. His parents were two loyal Shadowclan warriors. He was born in a litter of five. He had two brothers and two sisters. Longclaw was always the odd kit out. He and his siblings fought constantly and they always won. When he was two moons rogues attacked. His father was leading the band. Longkit watched his father kill everyone in the nursery but him. His father didn't even notice him. The rogues were chased away and his father killed. Thanks to Starclan one queen had been getting prey. She was devastated with the death of her kits, but she raised Longkit good. She made sure he was always content. Never did she show any hate to him. For he was the son of her kits murderer. The day came for his apprentice ceremony. He became Longpaw and was given to the deputy to train. He worked hard to please his mentor. Longpaw rarely lazed about. Leaf bare worked into the clans and Longpaw began to go off alone. He was on one of his rambles when he came across his adoptive mother, Skychaser. He dipped his head in greeting and continued onward. Skychaser followed. "Yes?" He asked turning to face her. Thwap! A pawful of claws slammed into his face. "How dare you speak to me! How dare you not even true Riverclan! You who's father abandoned yet another clan and killed my family!" The words flew at him so fast. He didn't understand. was she saying he was half clan? He was still dazed from her attack. "Wha...? What do you mean?" he asked shaking away his wooziness. "Did no one tell you? Your father was half Windclan! Hah! You thought you were perfect! Why do you think your so fast? Well guess what? I'm gonna make sure Shadowclan stays pure!" Skychaser screeched. Her eyes rolling madly. Longpaw dodged her first attack easy enough. He didn't want to attack her! She had raised him! She was about to lunge again when his mentor leapt from the shadows. "Skychaser! How can you attack an apprentice? He has been a loyal cat from the day he was born! It's not his fault his father turned rogue and killed our kits!" His mentor defended him. Skychaser backed down. Though her eyes glared at Longpaw. Longpaw became a warrior at the age of 13 moons. Two moons later his mentor was killed by a badger. Longclaw grieved alongside Skychaser and the other cats. He had been a warrior for quite sometime when Skychaser just disappeared. Ever since he has vowed loyalty to his clan. But as a strange turn of events, Longclaw chose a mate from Riverclan. Having four kits with the she-cat.
IC:
Mate: Rosethorn
Kits: Duskkit* [Dead, Daughter], Rustkit [Son], Mottledkit [Daughter], Creamkit [Son]
Codeword: Surrounding Forest
Age: 25 moons
Alliance: Shadowclan
Rank: Deputy
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Longclaw is a lean weathered tom. He is mainly gray with a large white patch on his chest. His muzzle is white as well. Longclaw is sized well enough. He has no extras and he has nothing to small. He does however have longer claws, tail, and body then most cats. His fur is short and wiry. Longclaw has light handsome amber eyes. He is fast and you'd wonder at his heritage. Longclaw's ears are like silk and his under belly is just as soft. Longclaw is light on his paws and very quiet. His tail is constantly moving, even in his sleep. It only flicks, but it annoys Longclaw greatly.
Picture:
Personality: He is the kind of cat you can trust. He is always ready to give out advice. He surprisingly isn't patient. Longclaw is pushing for more. Constantly stepping on others tails. Many hate him for the way he acts, but Longclaw cares not what others think. He will never break the warrior code unless it is for good. He is only loyal to Shadowclan and Starclan. Longclaw doesn't fall in love easily. Anyone trying to win his heart will be sourly disappointed. That doesn't mean he won't ever settle down. He's just checking out his options. Longclaw can be friendly, but only to close cats.
History: Longclaw was born in Shadowclan on a warm newleaf night. His parents were two loyal Shadowclan warriors. He was born in a litter of five. He had two brothers and two sisters. Longclaw was always the odd kit out. He and his siblings fought constantly and they always won. When he was two moons rogues attacked. His father was leading the band. Longkit watched his father kill everyone in the nursery but him. His father didn't even notice him. The rogues were chased away and his father killed. Thanks to Starclan one queen had been getting prey. She was devastated with the death of her kits, but she raised Longkit good. She made sure he was always content. Never did she show any hate to him. For he was the son of her kits murderer. The day came for his apprentice ceremony. He became Longpaw and was given to the deputy to train. He worked hard to please his mentor. Longpaw rarely lazed about. Leaf bare worked into the clans and Longpaw began to go off alone. He was on one of his rambles when he came across his adoptive mother, Skychaser. He dipped his head in greeting and continued onward. Skychaser followed. "Yes?" He asked turning to face her. Thwap! A pawful of claws slammed into his face. "How dare you speak to me! How dare you not even true Riverclan! You who's father abandoned yet another clan and killed my family!" The words flew at him so fast. He didn't understand. was she saying he was half clan? He was still dazed from her attack. "Wha...? What do you mean?" he asked shaking away his wooziness. "Did no one tell you? Your father was half Windclan! Hah! You thought you were perfect! Why do you think your so fast? Well guess what? I'm gonna make sure Shadowclan stays pure!" Skychaser screeched. Her eyes rolling madly. Longpaw dodged her first attack easy enough. He didn't want to attack her! She had raised him! She was about to lunge again when his mentor leapt from the shadows. "Skychaser! How can you attack an apprentice? He has been a loyal cat from the day he was born! It's not his fault his father turned rogue and killed our kits!" His mentor defended him. Skychaser backed down. Though her eyes glared at Longpaw. Longpaw became a warrior at the age of 13 moons. Two moons later his mentor was killed by a badger. Longclaw grieved alongside Skychaser and the other cats. He had been a warrior for quite sometime when Skychaser just disappeared. Ever since he has vowed loyalty to his clan. But as a strange turn of events, Longclaw chose a mate from Riverclan. Having four kits with the she-cat.
IC:
Gray and white figure trailed the grounds listlessly. His amber eyes glared at the white fog. His long tail flicking back and forth. The irritated tom cat stooped under a bush. Though he was fast and able to catch prey on the run. He was better at ambush hunting. A thrush lighted on the ground. Giving off little chirps here and there. The brown speckled prey began pecking at the ground. Longclaw creapt forward always light on his feet. The bird looked his way. He froze, nothing moved. The birds gaze locked onto the cats eyes. The bird's wings moved as it began to move. The slow motion sped up and Longclaw darted forward. Latching onto the birds neck. It died instantly. He set it down and covered it with dirt.
[/center]Mate: Rosethorn
Kits: Duskkit* [Dead, Daughter], Rustkit [Son], Mottledkit [Daughter], Creamkit [Son]
Codeword: Surrounding Forest
